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Why post it?

You admit it's uninteresting, but you post it anyway?

I see some potential in this, but that's about all that interests me.

Okay...

I was more interested by the ending sequence with a logo, as that deceieved me into believe, what was actually the movie, was an intro to something interesting.

I was wrong.

Overall, the animation was good, although there wasn't a lot of organic movement, so I guess I'm just saying you can draw well. This short just isn't interesting.

Video

Eh, it seems a bit random and sporadic for my tastes.

And why did you make/use a video recording? That lowers the quality significantly.

Even the creator says it's crap

You beg not to get a low rating, while, in the same sentence, admit this is crap.

Basic concept

Your executing was okay. Some toast themed backgrounds might help. A few more toast themed graphics in general would help set a general motif.

For your second submission I have to say it was pretty good.

Hmm...

I expected a game I'd played before (breakout) with a few twists, but this was a pleasant surprise. It's not the greatest idea, but it's fun enough to burn a few minutes from my day.