I was more interested by the ending sequence with a logo, as that deceieved me into believe, what was actually the movie, was an intro to something interesting.
I was wrong.
Overall, the animation was good, although there wasn't a lot of organic movement, so I guess I'm just saying you can draw well. This short just isn't interesting.
I expected a game I'd played before (breakout) with a few twists, but this was a pleasant surprise. It's not the greatest idea, but it's fun enough to burn a few minutes from my day.
But the gameplay looks like textbook RPG gameplay, and from what I can tell of the story, it sounds rather generic (Evil corperation does evil things, Good guys stop them). The whole thing makes me think the was inspired by Final Fantasy 7.
But the trailed itself appears pretty professional, I'll certainly try the game if it's free.
Final Fantasy VII was clearly a huge inspiration, however I can only say the story for SoU goes far deeper. This is after all a teaser. And it will be free. But thanks for your comment!
I don't read Spanish (I think it's Spanish, could be Portuguese) but I figured out how to play pretty quickly.
Meh. I don't think your skills in action script are lacking for this purpose, I just think this isn't that great of a game idea.
And why would you post this on a predominantly English speaking site? I'm sure many people are going to down rate you simply because it's not in a language they can understand, not to mention if your understand of English is limited, many serious reviews may be completely useless to you.
Hey!, I can read & hear the english perfectly, talking & writing... is another story.
& The text in spanish was a mistake ,It wasn't my idea leave it .
Anyway you are right the game is not good.
If I didn't think fallout boy was a completely retarded band, wouldn't I just get their album and listen to it? Why is this necessary? Not to mention the questionable legality...
i know FOB isn't to everyone's tastes, but i'm just using random albums to try create a viable standalone player that i can embed into a website i'm building, but if you would prefer a different artist, let me know and i'll see what i can do
TRayT
All 20 flash Reviews
Rated 1 / 5 stars May 30, 2009
Why post it?
You admit it's uninteresting, but you post it anyway?
I see some potential in this, but that's about all that interests me.
Rated 0 / 5 stars May 30, 2009
Okay...
I was more interested by the ending sequence with a logo, as that deceieved me into believe, what was actually the movie, was an intro to something interesting.
I was wrong.
Overall, the animation was good, although there wasn't a lot of organic movement, so I guess I'm just saying you can draw well. This short just isn't interesting.
Rated 0 / 5 stars May 30, 2009
Even the creator says it's crap
You beg not to get a low rating, while, in the same sentence, admit this is crap.
lol its a joke video.......... its not crap because its better than herbie: fully loaded
Rated 0.5 / 5 stars May 30, 2009
Video
Eh, it seems a bit random and sporadic for my tastes.
And why did you make/use a video recording? That lowers the quality significantly.
the reason i did it was because when i made this i had no idea how to import my audio into flash, so i just used adobe preimer
Rated 2 / 5 stars May 30, 2009
Basic concept
Your executing was okay. Some toast themed backgrounds might help. A few more toast themed graphics in general would help set a general motif.
For your second submission I have to say it was pretty good.
Rated 3 / 5 stars May 30, 2009
Hmm...
I expected a game I'd played before (breakout) with a few twists, but this was a pleasant surprise. It's not the greatest idea, but it's fun enough to burn a few minutes from my day.
Rated 2.5 / 5 stars May 30, 2009
Interesting...
I like to voice actor doing the narration.
But the gameplay looks like textbook RPG gameplay, and from what I can tell of the story, it sounds rather generic (Evil corperation does evil things, Good guys stop them). The whole thing makes me think the was inspired by Final Fantasy 7.
But the trailed itself appears pretty professional, I'll certainly try the game if it's free.
Final Fantasy VII was clearly a huge inspiration, however I can only say the story for SoU goes far deeper. This is after all a teaser. And it will be free. But thanks for your comment!
Rated 1 / 5 stars May 30, 2009
Meh
I don't read Spanish (I think it's Spanish, could be Portuguese) but I figured out how to play pretty quickly.
Meh. I don't think your skills in action script are lacking for this purpose, I just think this isn't that great of a game idea.
And why would you post this on a predominantly English speaking site? I'm sure many people are going to down rate you simply because it's not in a language they can understand, not to mention if your understand of English is limited, many serious reviews may be completely useless to you.
Hey!, I can read & hear the english perfectly, talking & writing... is another story.
& The text in spanish was a mistake ,It wasn't my idea leave it .
Anyway you are right the game is not good.
Rated 0 / 5 stars May 30, 2009
For those of you who don't understand
This is just a retarded button with some padding to make this file ~7MB. All this is is a button that does nothing.
true
Rated 0 / 5 stars May 30, 2009
What use is this?
If I didn't think fallout boy was a completely retarded band, wouldn't I just get their album and listen to it? Why is this necessary? Not to mention the questionable legality...
legality, schmegality...
i know FOB isn't to everyone's tastes, but i'm just using random albums to try create a viable standalone player that i can embed into a website i'm building, but if you would prefer a different artist, let me know and i'll see what i can do